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What A Commotion
Water Commotion
Anticipation
Yearning
Swelling
Connecting
With water
Gathering speed
Excitement
Shifting position
Concentrating
Narrowing focus
Melding with nature
Blending with element
Extending life
Being at one
With the elements
Wind and water
Wave
Breaking
Fear
Connecting
With death
Leaning back
Sinking down
Swirling
Dipping
Unerving
Swerving
Left then right
Going with the flow
Yielding to the control
Of the current
Beneath
Water
Splashing
Thrashing
Swirling
Hurling
Unfurling
In a torrent
Of pushing and pulling
Meandering and mulling
Contemplating death
In a torrent
At the edge
Of Life and death